考官評語
Fluency & Coherence/score 6.5
Natural and confident in
speaking manner , ideas are balanced
and smoothly linked
Lexical Resource/score 3.5
mostly good, tried to give , p2 too short
specific detail on ideas though occasionally
slipped to basic. eg delicious
Grammatical Range and Accuracy/score 3.5
Fairly accurate minor slips in
tense . especially p2
Pronunciation/score 6.5
clear and coherent
throughout“idea“became “Idill“
文法糾錯
錯誤1:應為Australia,或者in an Australian family
錯誤2:應該在Australian family前加上不定冠詞an
錯誤3:Also在這里用得不是很恰當,因為前后兩
句話之間并不是并列關系。
錯誤4:這句話應該這樣表達:There was a growth of 5 dollars in...或者There was a 5-dollar growth in
錯誤5:Especially在這里用的也比較牽強,因為
前后兩句話是分別描述兩個花費上升的項目,并
沒有“特別是”這樣的概念。
錯誤6:應為a slight increase,“there be”句
型表達數據變化應該用形容詞搭配名詞
錯誤7:“spending”后應該接介詞on
錯誤8:“of total expenditure”多余,應去掉
錯誤9:介詞應該用to而不是up
錯誤10:應該用介詞on
錯誤11:整句話的表達應改為:Australian families
spent 10 dollars less on clothing which fell from
30 dollars to 20 dollars.
錯誤12:“of total expenditure”多余。
錯誤13:應改為大寫Meanwhile,后接逗號。
錯誤14:時態錯誤,應該為made
錯誤15:去掉large number of
錯誤16:應為almost all expenditures
錯誤17:介詞錯誤,應為on